OK, a lot of it is quite rough, and in general it is quit boring, despite adding in some jazzy music.
All the molecules and stuff just come in from the side or zoom in from the centre...
Information-qise, I think some parts need clearing up too. And at the end there should be some explanation of how proteins go about their business.
Also, the images need to be made in illustrator because I made them inphotoshop and they look all rouh and rubbish.
I think the scene changes need to improve and also the typography.
I don't want it to look too "GCSE bitesize"- I want it to look more like these...
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